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lexicology ([personal profile] lexicology) wrote in [personal profile] edenfalling 2012-12-03 11:49 pm (UTC)

A very fascinating scene! I always love writing that tries to convey that which cannot quite be comprehended, and I think you did a fairly good job. I can see what you mean about it not quite fitting in with the rest of the story, though.
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