Elizabeth Culmer (![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
edenfalling) wrote2005-04-01 11:56 am
edenfalling) wrote2005-04-01 11:56 am
Sasuke and Black Jewels
Last night, between marathon sessions of reading the Black Jewels trilogy (which... still bugs me with weird plot and characterization issues, despite its overall coolness), I tried to exorcise the vicious plotbunny ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
askerian dumped on me, via a Sasuke POV continuation of 'Tension, Before.'
Sasuke is tricky to write.
And the drama of the Black Jewels seems to have crept in at some point, because he's not quite acting right, though I think Sakura and Naruto are reasonable.
Must figure out an ending of sorts, and then go fix Sasuke's silent analysis/commentary this evening.
...
Will now stop spamming LJ and get back to work.
askerian dumped on me, via a Sasuke POV continuation of 'Tension, Before.'Sasuke is tricky to write.
And the drama of the Black Jewels seems to have crept in at some point, because he's not quite acting right, though I think Sakura and Naruto are reasonable.
Must figure out an ending of sorts, and then go fix Sasuke's silent analysis/commentary this evening.
...
Will now stop spamming LJ and get back to work.