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Elizabeth Culmer ([personal profile] edenfalling) wrote2005-05-26 04:11 pm

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Went to work on "Secrets" last night and had the sudden revelation that I don't remember Ginny ever learning about the dead roosters.

*headdesk*

Will have to go back and insert that somewhere this chapter. Probably Ron can mention it.

When I finish the story, I'm going to have to go back and edit again for minor continuity issues like this. (Though I did manage to work in the goof-up with Tom's explanation for the paint down Ginny's nightdress. That was an accident, but it actually makes sense now in terms of the plot. *grin*)

Anyway, I wrote a few paragraphs of "Apartment Manager" instead -- mostly describing Hino Suisen, kunoichi of Hidden Grass, who is one of the people in the next fight.