edenfalling | progress

Have heard from two of my betas re: "Secrets." They like it! However, Quetzle spotted a minor goof that will take a bit of thinking to fix. Do I need to fix it? It's not terribly important, but it's one of those little things that will irritate me forever if I don't...

Bother. Will think about this tomorrow; I'm too tired to write now. It'd all come out garbled anyway.