You know, at this rate, I'm probably never ever going to stop fangirling you.
That said: I read this with utter glee. I love your take on Belial and I grew really fond of Phanuel - after already having been amazed at how you fleshed out Jibril, I think character creation is one of your great strengths as a writer.
Another thing I always find enjoyable is your writing style, which is really easy to read and get into and manages to convey a lot of atmosphere in relatively few words.
The only thing I was a little confused about was the casual way the angels spoke about love and sex, considering that according to Zaphikel, any kind of love was strictly forbidden in Heaven - but then again, Kaori Yuki isn't too clear on this herself.
I'm really looking forward to the next installment!
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That said: I read this with utter glee. I love your take on Belial and I grew really fond of Phanuel - after already having been amazed at how you fleshed out Jibril, I think character creation is one of your great strengths as a writer.
Another thing I always find enjoyable is your writing style, which is really easy to read and get into and manages to convey a lot of atmosphere in relatively few words.
The only thing I was a little confused about was the casual way the angels spoke about love and sex, considering that according to Zaphikel, any kind of love was strictly forbidden in Heaven - but then again, Kaori Yuki isn't too clear on this herself.
I'm really looking forward to the next installment!