Uwah, so cute. *^^*

I think a few character reactions were a bit abrupt, and you didn't detail much on everyone's ZOMGWTF feelings or description of the physical world in general. (Indiana is so blasé. is he like that in canon? i forget. XD Giles could be annoyed by it or at least think about it, if the "no strong reaction" is intended.) Also is the kid arriving naked or in a basket or what? is she a brand-new newborn or a little older? (also, it's been so long since I read the first fic. Is there some emotional flinching at the mention of calling her Joyce or is this long enough after her death that they wouldn't feel briefly saddened? ^^;;;) But apart from a little lack of detailing, it's a nice ending, and whee for the fertility ritual having consequences. ^___^

I like that she has a Giles nose. And Buffy would definitely react like that, so yay. ^^