Thank you! The interesting thing about 15-minute fics is that even when I run over the time limit, I don't really have a chance to stop and second-guess myself, so the way the story happens is just the way it happens... which sometimes means stylistic choices I might not otherwise make, like the distanced narration of the opening and the attempt to pull back from the tight third person POV I default to.

Lucy IS wonderful, amen, the end. Anybody who tries to argue against that is just wrong. :-)