I'd like a new story to read. I presume you want mostly howlers, flow problems, and confusing bits pointed out? I'd read it on a plane without a real keyboard, so I couldn't do a worthwhile line-by-line edit. I'd also find it a lot easier to read a txt or html file than a word doc, if that's a deal breaker.

kuchinashi+dreamwidth@gmail.com if it sounds like what you want.