ext_244326 ([identity profile] explodingfrogs.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] edenfalling 2012-04-16 04:29 pm (UTC)

========> Jarlia: Okay, so pranking Vriska is right out. Maybe we can try psychoanalyzing her into submission.

Failing that, maybe some incredibly shitty/"ironic" slam poetry will help.

Maybe even both at once!

...You're totally doomed, aren't you.

(Huh. I honestly thought that Troll!John would be a restraining influence on Vriska, maybe even her moirail. Not that I'm complaining. This more interesting than just nipping it in the bud.

Besides, no Sburb means no Doc Scratch, which means that someone has be the distaction in the FLARP incident, and someone has to influence Vriska's decision kill Aradia. This version of John makes as much sense as anyone.

Minor nitpicks: I would have expected troll versions of the kids to have somewhat more exaggerated typing quirks than their human selves, in keeping with the general troll pattern. [Although Troll!Rose can probably get away with impeccable standard spelling and grammar, considering how unusual this seems to be among trolls!]

Also, regarding the ==> symbol: you'll note that in Hivebent, it's ======>. This is because each = stands for two kids/trolls, and there were twelve trolls to four kids. This fic has sixteen trolls, so it should be ========>.)

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