branchandroot: oak against sky (Default)
Branch ([personal profile] branchandroot) wrote in [personal profile] edenfalling 2013-03-04 04:57 pm (UTC)

*sparkles* I'd forgotten how much I like the way these three bounce off each other. And seriously, this is by no means unnecessary or pointless background.

I think a /little/ more on the teakettle demons might be good? A bit about how high they are in relation to the pov character, stuff like that, just so the reader can get the spacial image. How they sound comes through really well, though.

Post a comment in response:

(will be screened)
(will be screened if not validated)
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting

If you are unable to use this captcha for any reason, please contact us by email at support@dreamwidth.org