wow. That is mindblowing to realize that you have been working on this for 8 years.
I went back and read the entire offering, and while your writing has improved, more smooth and polished as well
as getting across the mood and continuing to drive the story forward, it is still recognizably an Elizabeth Culmer story.
Did you read any of Mal's work with Gundam Wing?
Thank you for continuing this. I enjoy seeing the three disparate characters work things out.
C