brief writing update

[edenfalling]

Those of you who like "Lemonade" will be pleased to know that I now have the entire story outlined (yes, by god, there IS a plot!) and chapter 3 is 1/3 written. I make no promises as to when I'll get around to the other 2/3, but I thought I'd let you know that I haven't forgotten the story. *beams angelically*

And I ask again: is anybody out there willing to beta-read a Death Note story for me? I would be extremely grateful...

Comments

[askerian]

Lemonade!!! YESS.


ohhh death note yes. *___* I'd propose myself, but I'm not that rigorous a betareader and besides I don't trust myself on grammar. If you want help for the characterization or flow, I might be able to help, but for the technical side, um. Not so much.

[edenfalling]

Characterization and flow are exactly what I'm worried about. If you have time, could you look it over in the next day or two?

[askerian]

I have nothing but time. Gimmegimme~

... though that's going to be hard with you not having AIM or something like that. Oh well, i'll manage. :D

[askerian]

... askerian at hotmail.com. brain, what's that? I bet that's inspiring confidence. XD

[edenfalling]

Sent!

[karit.livejournal.com]

...somehow I'm unsure whether to bow down at your feet and praise the lord, or curse you for your evil taunting. Gimme a while to think about it.

Either way, Lemonade! :D :D

[edenfalling]

I'm trying to finish some other things that really should've been finished sometime in December, but once I get them done, "Lemonade" will move up the priority list. :-)

[valles-uf.livejournal.com]

Lemonade! WAI! WAI!

*dances madly - no fans, this time*

Ja, -n

[edenfalling]

*preens*

[darksideofstorm.livejournal.com]

*cheers!* I love that story, Sasuke is just too much emo fun XD And Duo! *cracks up*

Out of interest, how did you choose the title?

[edenfalling]

"When life hands you lemons, make lemonade."

Plus, of course, it contains the word 'lemon.' ;-)

[darksideofstorm.livejournal.com]

Ah, clever ^__^

My favourite variation on that is 'when life hands you lemons, make grape juice and let the world wonder how you did it'.

[edenfalling]

*cracks up*

[yuki-buffy.livejournal.com]

*squees in delight*

[edenfalling]

*preens some more*

^^

[gabriel-chaos.livejournal.com]

Sent you fanart.
Hope you like it.
If you didn't see it, I posted it in my lj as well.

Re: ^^

[edenfalling]

I saw, and I liked! I will mention it and make links soonish.