progress on "Paint the Town"

[edenfalling]

I think I figured out the sex scene.

*is in mild shock at the logistics of it, but happy to finally know who's doing what to whom when*

lasultrix, this is all your fault!

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[lasultrix.livejournal.com]

Glad to hear those recalcitrant limbs are finally behaving.

[edenfalling]

Well, it's tricky with three people; there's always the risk of making someone extraneous. :-) And the story has settled into rotating viewpoints -- one per section -- so I needed some way to "hook" into the action via Draco's POV.

It might have been easier through someone else's eyes, but it was his turn. And he's come up with a devious plan that actually ties into dialogue from earlier in the story.