not done yet, but definitely getting somewhere

[edenfalling]

Managed to de-circularize the Amane family argument a little -- Eiji has now been hit with a minor clue bat regarding his treatment of his wife. Hopefully the realization will stick. Also successfully dropped the plot brick on them.

Now it's just Naga's scene to go.

3,325 words and counting. :-)

Comments

[jjhunter]

Hip hip hooray!

[edenfalling]

And tonight I finished! Now I just need a day or two to step back and revise it a little.

[askerian]

Hee. Go go go fiiiight you can do iiiit~~~

[edenfalling]

I just want to know why both Naga scenes in this chapter want to turn into fanservice -- Suisen is naked for half the first one, and now the civilian shopkeeper is just out of the shower wearing nothing but a towel in the second one. Why???

(3,650 words! But bed now. I have work tomorrow.)

[askerian]

Pfff. Naga is a pimp, is why. *approves!*

(Progress is progress!)