There is a reason I keep saying that Alonde's memos are inadvisable! :-D

I'm really glad Vriska felt IC to you -- she has been maddeningly difficult to write in this story, trying to walk the line of making her understandable (maybe even sympathetic in places) without downplaying her awfulness, her screwy mindset, or the terrible things she does.

Okay, Davven first. I can do that. Do you want to drop in on him while he's still talking to Terezi, or after he wraps that up and is starting to do stuff? (Also, do you want to read the conversation he will presumably have with Kanaya?)