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[edenfalling]

Note: as I work on 'Apartment Manager,' I have been revising previously posted chapters so the story flows better and is more internally consistent. Not all of these changes have made it onto lj. When I'm all done, I'm going to put the story on ff.net, and all the changes will be in that version.

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[redwolfoz.livejournal.com]

You may have to remind me of this later if I sudenly ask why someone's doing something weird.

[edenfalling]

It's more changing minor characters' names, switching the 'civilians' from Anbu to jounin (since revealing the identities of your secret forces to foreign ninja is pretty stupid), adding a time limit to the second test, clarifying the mechanics of different genjutsu types... things like that. Little continuity fiddles.