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Jadis in the garden: separation from God is only a punishment if you believe in him.

[ETA: The AO3 crosspost and the ff.net crosspost are now up.]

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Heart's Desire
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"Come in by the gold gates or not at all," the garden's maker had written. And truly, there was no need to turn aside, walk a quarter-circle around the hilltop, and clamber over the wall, but Jadis was the Queen of Charn and she bowed to no one.

She would have the apple on her own terms, as she had earned everything else in her life.

The fruit was sharp and almost painfully sweet, with a metallic tang underneath that expanded to bitter and salt in the aftertaste. The juice was shockingly dark for such a fair-fleshed fruit. Jadis licked the red-brown stain from her hand and laughed.

Pure theatrics: the apple bled. Was that supposed to induce guilt or shame?

The Lion had made this world, she acknowledged, but she had been here at the making; her magic was thus woven deep into its earth and air, inseparable from its very fabric of being. Until this world died, the Lion must adjust his plans to account for her. And even after, she could continue -- if that simpering fool had learned to travel between the planes, surely so could she! And she would learn to cross directly, without the crutch of that horrible, drowning place between the worlds.

A breeze stirred the garden, swirling petals and scent from the tree. Jadis sneezed, and then nearly gagged on the rotting sweetness of the silvery perfume. Stumbling, she turned aside, holding her arms across her face as if to block the very air from attacking her.

The air stilled. The scent dissipated.

Jadis lowered her arms and clenched her free hand, seething. So. The Lion had fashioned a trap for those who defied him and ate the fruit unbidden. But even he could not stop the apple from performing its function; already she could feel new strength coursing through her blood and bones like a river of ice, scouring away her mortality.

She had forever, now. She had new magic to master, a new world to conquer, a new foe to destroy. If the Lion thought that a mere tree would defeat her or that length of days would lead her to despair, he was a fool, as her sister had been.

Jadis ran her tongue across her teeth, savoring the iron tang of immortality, and took another bite.

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Inspired by the 4/27/09 [livejournal.com profile] 15_minute_fic word #108: hungry

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Near the end of The Magician's Nephew Aslan tells Digory and Polly that Jadis "has won her heart's desire; she has unwearying strength and endless days like a goddess. But length of days with an evil heart is only length of misery and already she begins to know it. All get what they want: they do not always like it."

I never believed him. First, people do not always get what they want; anyone who claims otherwise is engaging in sophistry or wishful thinking. Secondly, the sense I got of Jadis in The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe was emphatically not of a woman mired in despair. Jadis is too practical to give in to despair or wallow in depressive introspection, and I am not at all sure she's even capable of misery; her emotional repertoire seems limited to anger, frustration, fear, hatred, pride, triumph, (self-)satisfaction, and sometimes a pure joy in skill and motion. Possibly also greed or covetousness, but I think even her ambition is more a surety that everything already does belong to her, and she just has to make people acknowledge that truth.

Jadis is evil, no two ways about it. She's selfish, cruel, and probably sociopathic -- other people are not real to her except as tools or obstacles. But length of days with an evil heart is only miserable if you know and care about your relative moral standing. If you don't -- and Jadis doesn't -- then length of days gives you time for everything you find pleasurable, like magic and conquest and fighting.

So with all due respect, I must disagree with Aslan (and therefore, more relevantly, with C. S. Lewis). :-)

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NOTICE! There is an extensive discussion in the comments on the Livejournal version of this post, which happened after I imported my journal to Dreamwidth. I think it is worth checking out.

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Date: 2009-04-30 06:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lassiterfics.livejournal.com
!!! I love Jadis and am always XD when I find good Jadis fic. Like now! Jadis as Eve omg yay! Your summary line is very apt, too. (and my edmund icon keywords, lemme show you 'em XD)

She had forever, now. She had new magic to master, a new world to conquer, a new foe to destroy.
<3

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Date: 2009-05-01 01:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baka-mazoku.livejournal.com
This is beautiful!

And yes, much worship for Queen Jadis!

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Date: 2009-05-01 02:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baka-mazoku.livejournal.com
Agreed. ^_^

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Date: 2009-05-04 07:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-lirenel.livejournal.com
Interesting story, well written. I especially like Jadis mocking the theatrics of bleeding apples.

As for what Aslan said: I think he's saying that, despite getting what she wants, she'll never have true satisfaction. She has immortality...unless that blasted prophecy about sons of Adam and daughters of Eve is true. She has complete control and power in Narnia...except for those who secretly work against her. I read LWW and I see a dictator with every power possible, but completely terrified that it can be taken away from her at any moment...just like she took away her sister's victory with a word. She is miserable, if only because, deep down, she knows that, despite her immortality and unwearying strength, she will never be fully safe in her rule.

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Date: 2009-05-05 05:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-lirenel.livejournal.com
I don't have my books with me at the moment, so this is off the top of my head. From what I understand, the apple just gives immortality - there is nothing to suggest that this is connected with anything else in Narnia. And, even if she is immortal, it doesn't mean her rule is immortal - hence the prophecy - which would mean there would always be the nagging doubt that she would spend her whole, immortal life as queen of Narnia. (Also, as a LOTR fan, I can't help but think of the immortal elves...who could be killed in battle or by grief. Immortal can just mean un-aging)

And Aslan did kill her in LWW, and Lewis never suggested otherwise. The Witch only partially came back in the Prince Caspian movie. In the book, Nikabrik and the hag only suggests that she could return...and I really wouldn't take them as reliable witnesses. Remember, Aslan is God/Christ: He has power over all created things, mortal or immortal. Whether you personally believe in Christ or God, Lewis created a canon where Aslan=Christ, and this has to be taken into consideration when it comes to writing about Aslan's abilities and sovereignty (GeoffryF on ff.net talks about this on his profile: he's an atheist, but he writes Aslan as Christ because that's canon).

Sorry for longness of my response! It's late and I just finished writing two papers, so I am automatically writing with as many words possible to up my word count/pages written. =D

Re: long comment, part 1

Date: 2023-07-29 11:53 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] glenstorm63
Hi Elizabeth, 14 years on, I stumbled upon this conversation for the first time, not being a lurker in DreamWidth before.
I am utterly with you about Narnia being the whole world in LWW (until we learn at the end that kings and princes from across the sea sought Susan's and Lucy's hands in marriage) but that the broadening and diversification of the world in later books then does beg the question:
WTF is she even bothering with Narnia for at all? It's a little land. The idea of her being trapped in Narnia from the point she returns after 900 years to kill the Tree of Protection also occurred to me. So in my head canon (and stories) her 100 years as Queen is in fact her 100 years as chief prisoner (and executioner, always a stigmatised gig in history) and that the act of the tree dying is to seal the borders so that she cannot escape: and indeed to impose always winter, never Christmas. Not her direct doing. She springs a trap. Aslan sacrifices his people (as always) in achievement of his deeper magic and somehow they are still meant to love him and fawn upon him. Okay, okay, I'll pull back on the character hate just a little. Lol.
I am not a lover of AU, but in my alternate horror universe, which is not written, Jadis gets to use her Creation-Witness and Apple-Consumption power, her psycho-analytics, her sociopathy and sheer force of personality to subjugate the world. And not through ice and snow.
Have a nice day.

Re: long comment, part 1

Date: 2023-07-30 02:08 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] glenstorm63

Yep, all good.Sent on the go with Vodafone

reply to long comment, part 1

Date: 2009-05-06 03:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-lirenel.livejournal.com
Oh, I'm not offended; I enjoy having discussions about my favorite books, and they can get boring if everyone agrees on everything. =D

I agree, though, that Jadis probably didn't intend to rule only Narnia. I think we run into the problem that Lewis didn't start out to write a series, so that the other lands in the world Narnia inhabited are later inventions. So when writing LWW, Narnia really was the whole world. So that's all interpretable as you will.

I do have to disagree with you in that Aslan is not a literal equivalent of Jesus. For one, it's hardly good writing if you write "Aslan is Jesus" in the middle of a narrative. A good writer shows, he doesn't tell. But Lewis shows throughout the series that Aslan is equivalent to Jesus. Lewis describes this himself in one of his letters: "Has there never been anyone in this world who (1.) Arrived at the same time as Father Christmas. (2.) Said he was the son of the great Emperor. (3.) gave himself up for someone else's fault to be jeered at and killed by wicked people. (4.) Came to life again. (5.) Is sometimes spoken of as a Lamb...."

Now, I know that's an outside source, but it's only reciting what is in the book itself. Aslan comes at Christmas. He's the son of the Emperor-Over-The-Sea. He gave himself up in place of Edmund and came to life again. He appears as a lamb. Even his lion form comes from Christianity: Jesus as the Lion of Judah.

reply to long comment, part 2

Date: 2009-05-06 03:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-lirenel.livejournal.com
As for differing views of Jesus, as you stated that would have to be implied by the stories themselves. Aslan is always viewed as an immortal son of the Emperor, but also as the Creator which implies equal standing. He has power over death and seems to be all-knowing. Therefore, the Christ that Aslan is meant to represent would be the Christ that Lewis (and most Christians) believe in.

I can understand not wanting to write Aslan as Christ. It's not even always necessary for Christians to do so in many stories, particularly those in which the focus is not on any sort of theology. I've written stories myself that don't deal with Aslan at all. But if Aslan is in the story, he has to be written as he is in canon: as the immortal, all-powerful, not safe but good, Creator son of the Emperor-Over-the-Sea who has conquered death. That's how he's portrayed in the stories and that's how he should be written (I tend to be a purist when it comes to canon, regardless of if I like it or not). I don't mean to offend, but that's how I see it.

(Side note on Bacchus: I have a personal idea that characters like Bacchus and Father Christmas were given their names by King Frank and Queen Helen because they were similar to characters they remembered from England. Therefore I think Bacchus is similar to dryads, but for vines instead of trees, but he was similar enough to the Bacchus of our world that that's what Frank and Helen named him. But that's just me and not canon).

Re: reply to long comment, part 2

Date: 2009-05-06 09:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-lirenel.livejournal.com
Yah, I tend to do that to myself with my ideas. Though the 'Aslan coming to Narnia at Christmas' point is Lewis's, technically.

I will say, as a student of classics who's taken classes on paganism and the beginnings of Christianity, I tend to tire of the whole 'co-option' debate. I think you answer your own point when you said Christmas wasn't a spiritually notable holiday until recently. Other Christian holidays - besides Easter, Pentecost, and several Saints' days - were put in place in order to provide Christians alternate means of celebration when they left paganism. That doesn't make them unimportant, just not chronologically specific.

I always thought that the 'coming of spring' in LWW was actually an acceleration: winter went from perpetual, like, December 15th to choose a random date, to speeding up to Christmas and racing forward until spring. Christmas happened on Christmas, but time sped up so that it was only a short time until spring. But that's just my thought.

You can't take Narnia as an allegory. Lewis specifically stated that Narnia was a supposal: “Suppose there were a Narnian world and it, like ours, needed redemption. What kind of incarnation and Passion might Christ be supposed to undergo there?” as he said in one of his letters. The Incarnation and Passion in Narnia is different from that of our world because our world isn't comprised of Talking Animals, and there aren't any Romans who like crucifying people since Narnia has a different history.

I look forward to reading what else you have to say. Like I've mentioned, I enjoy a good discussion. =D

Re: REALLY long comment, part 1

Date: 2009-05-07 05:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-lirenel.livejournal.com
Ok, I'll try to answer each of these separately. Hopefully it will all make sense.

For this first point, I can see that part of your problem (bad word to use, but I can't think of another this time of night) in understanding Aslan as Christ is that you seem to have an impression of Christ that isn't that which most Christians have. While some sects of Christianity separate the physical and spiritual (a Greek influence), the Christianity of the early church and that which most Christians adhere to insists on the immutability of spirit and matter. God and Christ are spiritual beings, but Christ became fully human while being fully God. He physically resurrected from the dead: hence he ate and drank with the disciples and Thomas physically touched his side, and his second-coming is viewed as a physical coming. Christ, like humans, is both spiritual and physical.

I agree that Aslan is actually the least Christ-like in LWW, likely because Lewis didn't consciously choose to make Aslan a Christ figure until later. Of course, Narnia is a different world: we can't expect that the same rules apply to Christ in both worlds. Our world needed spiritual salvation, but Narnia, which was not necessarily a fallen world but one into which evil entered at the beginning, needed physical salvation. That Aslan acted differently in Narnia than Christ in our world is dependent on the needs of each world.

As for Bacchus and the river god and the nymphs and the 'pagan dieties', I've already mentioned one theory. However, it is my view also that Bacchus and the gods of Narnia are not actually gods, despite their names. They were created (by Aslan) with certain abilities, just as some humans are born with insane math skills or physical strength. And, like Christians to God, the Narnians use their skills in service to Aslan.

For VODT and your theory he was is a pagan lion-god in our world: I would politely request that you study the ancient myths and try to find a pagan lion-god with the attributes that Aslan shows in CoN. As a classics major and ancient history/myth buff, I have yet to come across one. It is a moot point unless one can find a pagan lion-god who reflects the attributes of Aslan more than Christ.

In SC I was caught more by the image of Eustace piercing Aslan's paw with a thorn, with the blood resurrecting Caspian. To me, that is clearly Christian imagery.

I'm confused by your argument that the existence of the Calormene gods is un-Christian. Many Christians, particularly of the ancient church, believed that the pagan gods existed. However, Christian theology states that they are not gods in the sense that God is God, but that they are fallen angels: created, powerful beings who rebelled against god. I see no reason why the Calormene gods' existence subverts Aslan's power.

You have a good point about MN in that the Wood Between the Worlds had to be created separately. But there is no reason to suggest that Aslan/the Emperor/Christ/God did not create it as a primary creation with each individual world as a secondary creation. And I believe that a Christ figure in Charn isn't mentioned because there really wasn't room for it in the story. That doesn't mean he wasn't there and that the Charnians rejected him. We know little about what happened on Charn save what Jadis relates, and I don't consider her an unbiased witness. Plus, if you'll note, it is implied in MN that Aslan knows exactly what happened on Charn, he's just making Digory confess. How would he know unless he was there/was omnipotent?

Re: REALLY long comment, part 1

Date: 2009-05-08 04:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-lirenel.livejournal.com
Definitely interesting conversation! And I'm probably as much at fault with the confusion, since I wrote my answers late at night and probably didn't process your comments as well as I should have.

I think where we fell of the track was the difference between reading and writing. I believe that everyone has a right to their own interpretation of what they're reading, particularly if they're reading for enjoyment. I know I missed most of the Christian symbolism the first time I read Narnia, and I was raised in a very Christian home. And, like I mentioned, even Christians have problems with Narnia, including Lewis's best friend, Tolkien, because of the way they read it.

When writing in a fandom, though, I tend to be harder on the purist angle. I know not everyone agrees with me that author intent matters, but to me it's important to get into the author/creator's mind in order to write a fic that is coherent within that world, no matter what the fic writer's own beliefs are. If I were to write in the Northern Lights fandom (and I don't, I petered out after the first book), I would have to take Pullman's consideration when creating that world in mind when writing in it. I couldn't have the faux!Catholic church represent anything other than what Pullman sees as a corrupt church in our own world, despite the fact that I disagree with him vastly. But to do otherwise would be un-canon. I could create a splinter group within the church which worked for good, but I could not change the foundation of it.

I think my problem with understanding your relation of Aslan as a pagan deity stems from long years studying Greek, Roman, and Norse myths, combined with my understanding of them being 'real' in the sense that there were spiritual entities that took those 'forms' and were worshiped by many. There are certainly levels of power within pantheons, but none of them had the absolute power that Aslan seems to have over the other deities in Narnia. Zeus/Jupiter was only king because he overthrew his father (who overthrew his father), and was always wary of being overthrown himself (hence swallowing Metis and marrying Thetis off to Peleus). I saw the Zeus/father-god figure in Narnia as more along the lines of Tash: the most powerful god in the pantheon, but not all-powerful. After all, Zeus was subject to fate (hence he couldn't save his son Sarpedon), while the majority of the Norse pantheon actually die (and stay dead. Well, except Baldur, but some scholars think he might have been influenced by the Christian monks who actually wrote the myths down). Aslan just never fit my image of the pagan gods I've studied since I was a little kid.

But, again, that comes from our different experiences. I was raised a Christian, and have an intense interest in ancient myths, which influenced me to view things a certain way which others might not see the same. Which is why it's interesting to hear how you see things differently. I look forward to hearing more!
From: [identity profile] lady-lirenel.livejournal.com
Sorry for the long wait for a response. I had to write a paper on the thirteenth century for finals. *headdesk* Anyway, I'll try to do this the same way you did.

My basic problem with TLB is that in order to see it as an emotionally satisfying and ethically acceptable ending, you must agree to some tacit assumptions that I cannot agree to: namely that this particular crisis is self-evidently insoluble in a way that previous crises weren't... and that it is good and admirable for Aslan to call down the end of all things, divide all souls into the saved and the damned, and go home without a qualm.

I had always taken the crisis as one they were expecting to solve in some way. I believe there's talk, after the Calormenes take over Narnia, that Tirian and the others would rescue the Narnians near the stable and wage a guerilla war such as happened in Prince Caspian. Basically those Narnians at the stable were the only hope for the continuation of Narnia. And once Narnia fell completely, the world fell: because Aslan originally created the world for Narnians, with humans kinda sneaking in here and then. And, really, all that is good about that world doesn't really die, but is experienced as it 'should have been' had evil not entered into the world.

the great sorting of souls does not simply leave those who don't love Aslan alone. Instead of coming into the stable and being allowed to ignore Aslan's presence, the Talking Beasts cease to be Talking Beasts which always felt, to me, as if Aslan were taking away...their very souls...Furthermore, all those who fear and hate Aslan...swerve off into Aslan's shadow, which has a terribly ominous feel; either they are immediately transported to hell, or they remain in Narnia and die in ice shortly thereafter, or they are unmade as the Talking Beasts have been un-souled.

I can see where you're coming from here. But I don't see how the swerving of the creatures into the shadow deviates from what I said previously. They all came and looked into Aslan's face. Than they made a choice, to either stay with Aslan or go into the shadow. It was their choice, Aslan did not force them to go either way. As for the 'dumbing' of the Talking Animals...I'm not sure where to go with that, actually. There's no Christian theology that I know of that indicates anything of the sort happening at the end times. Possibly Lewis was postulating that, since Talking Animals were created differently from humans, their end would be different as well. Perhaps it was even meant as a kindness: instead of letting them go into the shadow, they can live eternally as regular beasts. Perhaps that's what they wanted. I agree, it's hard to take sometimes, though. I'm the first to admit, Lewis isn't perfect.

I think the implication of finality bothers me most: the idea that you get only one choice, and must abide by it for the rest of eternity, as if you will never learn or change but will be fixed from that moment onward. Lewis implies...that hell is forever. That is a denial of life and free will, and I find it ethically unacceptable.

I do not see how a final choice denies free will and life. People freely choice to spend eternity away from God. I think it highly unlikely that people will change their minds once they reach eternity. Of course, that's due to my perception of hell. To me, hell is a place where people are allowed to be their sinful selves, without the light of God that sometimes pierces the darkness of this world. Lewis' The Great Divorce shows this idea, actually, though I warn you it's a hard read and I don't understand about a third of it. Actually, the Great Divorce is interesting in that it postulates that people are given a chance to 'visit' heaven from hell and that some, very few, choose to stay: Lewis implies that, to those who choose heaven their time in hell was Purgatory. I don't have solid views on the existence of purgatory, but it seems a plausible explanation.

Plus, honestly, would you truly like a fluid eternity? It would just be an extension of this life and would cause heart-break and darkness. I would find an unsettled eternity unbearable, always wondering who might change their mind. It's hard enough in this world. A fixed eternity allows for joy.
From: [identity profile] lady-lirenel.livejournal.com
It's true that Bacchus, Silenus, and the river god defer to Aslan, but that can be seen as respect for a more powerful deity just as easily as it can been seen as respect for someone who grants them their power. In the absence of hard evidence, both interpretations are valid.

Yup, guess we'll have to agree to disagree. =D

if there is such a thing as fate, I can't think of any action Aslan takes that breaks any such foretold events.

And here we would get into the argument of who controls fate. In Zeus's case, he was subject to the Fates. Aslan, though, as Creator is also the creator of 'fate', so to speak. Therefore, it isn't so much that he is subject to what fate has determined, but that he created fate to determine such a thing happening. Of course, I'm not a complete determinist myself. I believe God/Christ wills for certain things to happen, but that we as humans determine how we reach those points. Bad explanation, I know. Believe me, this is yet another debate that hasn't been solved, even within the Christian community.

Also, my reading of LWW is that if Jadis had managed to kill Aslan in some other fashion, he would have stayed dead; he was only resurrected because his sacrifice met the terms of the Deeper Magic. So despite his power, I never saw Aslan as inherently indestructible.

Interesting. I always read it as Aslan was only able to be killed because he allowed himself to be killed. The White Witch was always portrayed as afraid of Aslan, and I felt that it was only his submission to Death that allowed the Witch to kill him.

So far as I can tell -- and I admit my knowledge on this subject is shallow -- every way to rationalize the essential nonsensicality of the Trinity has been declared a heresy; the only correct way to see it is to say that yes, it makes no sense, but it's beyond our comprehension and we must take it on faith. This, I confess, I flat-out can't do. From a Christian perspective, that's a failure on my part. From my perspective, that just means I have a different approach to religion.

I don't think it's a failure. I have a hard time taking things just on faith as well. But, if you think about it, we take a lot of things on faith in life. I have absolutely no idea how gravity works, despite years of schooling, but I have faith that it'll keep me on the ground and that it equals 9.8 m/s^2, because people smarter than me have it figured out. Faith in the trinity is having faith that God (who's a lot smarter than me) has it figured out.

And I don't think every way of explaining the Trinity has been declared a heresy, though it depends on who's saying which theory is a heresy. Probably everything in the history of the world has been declared a heresy by someone at sometime. But each denomination, I believe, has at least some sort of understanding on the Trinity, and Catholics and Orthodoxs have probably the fullest explanations (not that I can explain, or understand, some of it. That would involve more research than I have time to do during finals week).
From: [identity profile] lady-lirenel.livejournal.com
And I am okay with that! Just as I can interpret Lewis's books without considering Aslan an analogue of Jesus, other people can interpret any portrayal of Aslan that I write as if he is Jesus, whether that's what I was thinking as I wrote or not. It would be hypocritical of me to suggest otherwise. *grin* I just can't write with that interpretation held in my mind.

I guess it boils down to the fact that an Aslan written in fanfic should, in theory, be written as a character with attributes almost identical to Christ's, but that you, as an author, don't have to write Aslan with Christ in mind, just the attributes. That makes sense.

And I think that lack of strict one-to-one correlation is what allows the books to be read as if there is no correlation at all. The parallels are there if you approach the books from a certain point of view, but they vanish or twist if your initial point of view is different.

Valid point, and I think Lewis would agree. Tolkien would certainly agree, as he was none too fond of strict allegory.

I do wonder, actually, if the 'variant' characterization of Aslan in LWW might be one reason Lewis eventually said the books should be read in internal chronological order. Because if your first impression of Aslan is from LWW, you're much more likely to miss the Christian underpinnings than if you first meet him creating a world and a garden that has a Tree of Life. *grin* (I still think publication order is best, regardless of what that does to people's view of the religious subtext in the series, because LWW stands alone much better than MN, and is much more likely to lure people into reading further.)

Though I usually cringe at any mention of reading the series in chronological order first (I'm a member of the 2456317 club) you may have a point. I'm also under the impression that Lewis intended to go back and rewrite the earlier books with the later books in mind, but died before he could, which might have led to a different characterization of Aslan in LWW.

And while Pullman is in some ways more technically skilled than Lewis (there are fewer holes in his world-building and his characters are more rounded), he's much less successful at subordinating his ideology to his story.

That's what I understand, from what I've heard. It sounds like he just ran off the road with it at the end. And I truly dislike it when people have such a narrow focus of institutions and history. Yes, the church did bad things. Guess what, it's made of people and people do bad things. As my pastor says, a church is a hospital for the sick, not a museum of saints. But the church has also done a whole lot of good over the years, too.
From: [identity profile] lady-lirenel.livejournal.com
I agree that implicit or thematic canon is in some ways more important than explicit canon -- in other words, there's a difference between a story that portrays Aslan as manipulative and evil and a story that asks what might have happened if Edmund, not Lucy, had entered Narnia first and met Mr. Tumnus. The first would bother me a lot, though I could probably tamp down my discomfort while reading if it were well enough written otherwise. The second could be either fascinating or awful, depending on how it was written, but it wouldn't induce an automatic 'but that's wrong!' reaction the way the first story would.

Agreed, thematic canon is more important than explicit. All fanfiction messes with explicit canon by its very nature. I'll even allow for dark canon, where a character is inverted in order to explore responses (I wrote a fic once where Peter hates Edmund, based off of his rather stiff and flat character in the LWW book. I was playing with the inversion of a character, but stated it upfront and that I didn't agree with the characterization at all. It was still one of my least liked fics.). I would have a harder time with an inversion of Aslan's character, because I don't see room for an inversion. The flatness of Peter's character allowed me to speculate, but Aslan was more fleshed out and very much shown as a loving, good character.

So I choose to think of Aslan as a deity of love and justice who is completely independent of Jesus and the Trinity... and to either ignore or very heavily handwave most of TLB...I think I can, actually, manage to make most of the events of TLB palatable enough for me to swallow, but I'd have to do a lot of delicate tap-dancing over Lewis's phrasing of certain sentences and mentally embroider the edges of the story with various justifications Lewis does not bother to provide.

I think that's perfectly valid. Though I would be hesitant about something that ignored TLB if it took place during or after. Tweaking it a bit, like you suggest, would be fine, but ignoring it would be unwise, I think, as long as it fits in with the other six books.

it's often easier for me to think in stories than in essays.
Agreed a thousand times! I can't tell you the number of fics I've written either to explain a thought I had, or that ended up unconsciously explaining something that I hadn't thought about before writing it! And I think writing fanfiction helps us understand and think about the source material more than just writing an essay about it, because you have to think closely about the characters, in particular.
From: [identity profile] lady-lirenel.livejournal.com
I believe that there are no spiritual powers and no spiritual realm. I believe there is no life after death; this world and this life are the only ones we ever get, so we have to do our best here and now. I believe we are part of this earth and this universe; when we die, our bodies return to the world from which they came, and maybe one day, billions of years from now, fragments of the earth will become part of a new star; we are all connected to each other in the mystery of existence.

I find that an interesting philosophy, if rather sad from my own belief. I see so much misery in this world and can only yearn for the next where everything will be made right. Even a person who lives a good, happy life goes through misery and troubles at some point, does bad things. I also don't understand how this idea reconciles with your disgust over the loss of the Talking Animals' 'souls' in TLB, since you do not seem to believe in a spiritual world from which a soul comes. Or perhaps, you have a different definition of soul?

I believe that good is whatever helps another person, that sin is whatever harms another person, and that we should ask other people whether they've been hurt or helped instead of assuming we can judge for them. I believe that community is sacred, that learning is sacred, that there are infinite paths to wisdom and love, and that everything that leads to greater community and understanding is holy.

While it does make sense that good is whatever helps someone, can't it get confusing? What is your definition of 'help'? Help them be happy? What is happiness, then? What if, in helping someone, you hurt someone else? And I agree that working for a better community and understanding between people is a good thing, but do you truly think it is possible in this world? And what is your definition of holy? (I'm not being facetious with these questions, I truly want to know and understand).

Those beliefs can, of course, be abused, just as Christian beliefs can be abused and turned to hatred instead of the love Jesus preached.

Oh, most definitely. Which is why I like to believe that there will be an eternity where we can fully understand and be able to do as Christ instructed us to do, which isn't possible in this world. Even the best person in this world does something bad at least once, and probably thinks or contemplates evil more than they admit.

I believe that questions are sacred while answers are dangerous and not to be lightly accepted.

This confuses me. How are questions sacred (and what is your definition of sacred)? And how can questions be good and answers be bad? What is the use of questions without answers?

The point is to have reverence and respect for the universe and to live in such a way as to help people rather than harm them.

Those are very good values, can't dispute that. I just wonder what your basis for that is? Is there some basic truth behind why you believe that respecting the universe and helping people is a good thing. Again, it's an honest question. I am curious to understand your belief system. And please, feel free to ask me about my own faith if you want to know. I welcome any questions/problems you might have about my faith, because it makes me examine it more thoroughly and forces me to ask myself why I believe what I do.
From: [identity profile] lady-lirenel.livejournal.com
*nods* Gotcha. I can understand that viewpoint of TLB, and, as I think I mention in a previous response, I can't really give you an answer about what Lewis was trying to say.

I would have to say that my definition of a soul is close to the Catholic catechism: "In Sacred Scripture the term "soul" often refers to human life or the entire human person.230 But "soul" also refers to the innermost aspect of man, that which is of greatest value in him,231 that by which he is most especially in God's image: "soul" signifies the spiritual principle in man. " And I also believe that spirit and body are intertwined so intimately that we are not complete without both being in perfect concert with God's plan. In this life the soul and body conflict with each other due to sin, at death they are separated, and at the final judgement the body is raised, perfected, and reunited with the soul to make a complete person again.

Anyway, I look forward to hearing what else you have to say!

Re: REALLY long comment, part 2

Date: 2009-05-07 05:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-lirenel.livejournal.com
You don't seem to care much for LB, so I won't go into it except to say that I see Lucy's statement about the stable as a continuation/knowledge of Christianity as an outcome of her search for Aslan in our world which began in VODT.

As I mentioned before, the physicality of Aslan/the Emperor fits perfectly well in Christian theology. It seems that you see Aslan/The Emperor at the head of a pantheon. But where is it referenced in CoN that the 'lesser deities of Narnia' and 'the rival pantheon of Calormene' have any power other than what Aslan allows? I truly would like to know, I've never noticed it but I haven't ever looked for it before.

Aslan's deference to the Emperor still fits with Christianity. The Trinity is a complicated thing to go into, but I'll try as best I can. In the Trinity, Jesus, God, and the Holy Spirit are one and the same, and yet three and separate. In the Bible, Christ defers to God's command: he doesn't want to be crucified, but he says "Your will be done". It's part of what makes him fully human as well as fully God. I can't really explain it better: of course, Christian theologians have been arguing about specifics for donkey's years, so I can hardly do it justice. I will say that I thought the triple succession of "Myselfs" in HHB when Shasta is alone with Aslan points to a Trinitarian idea, though.

I don't think you're alone in your thinking. I believe Tolkien had the opposite problem, unable to see the fit of pagan religions along with a Christian supposal. Though, granted, his problem tended to be more that there were too many different pagan aspects and he thought Lewis should stick to just one. It's hard to go against your education. And believe me, sometimes I have a hard time with the Christ in Narnia idea. That's when I tell myself it's fiction and that Lewis was making certain points about Christianity, some of which I don't necessarily agree with. He was just human after all.

Re: REALLY long comment, part 3

Date: 2009-05-07 05:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-lirenel.livejournal.com
I'm not sure I can help with the cognitive dissonance. I can suggest that you do as GeofferyF and suppose that Christianity is true in the universe that Narnia inhabits, even if you don't believe it exists in this universe.

I can also say that true things are rarely easy to comprehend, not if they have real meaning.

I can't help you with feeling as if you are falsely proselytizing if you write Aslan as Christ. The thing is, many if not most of Aslan's attributes are Christ's: if you write Aslan as Aslan, and stay true to canon, you fall into that trap regardless because, just as many people read Aslan in CoN as Christ, they'll read your story and, if Aslan is written like Aslan, they'll see it in your fic as well.

Re: REALLY long comment, part 4

Date: 2009-05-07 05:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-lirenel.livejournal.com
I find that comment incredibly interesting, because some Christians have problems with LB because they think Lewis is too inclusionist: allowing Emeth into heaven despite the fact that he worshiped Tash.

But I also have to correct you on your assumptions about the Christian God. Yes, he is a god of love: he is love. But he is also a just god. The basic Christian idea of humanity is that we have become 'bent': we view ourselves as gods and want to be left alone to worship ourselves and our pleasures, to put it one way. Those who do not, through grace, love God would not want to be anywhere near him: it's like when you're next to someone who is close to perfect and you can't stand being near them because they make you aware of your faults. It would be unjust for God to force people who don't want to be anywhere near him to stand in his presence for eternity. It would be cruel. So God gives them what they want: to be away from him, to live their own lives without his presence. And, like the dwarfs in LB, they'll live exactly how they expect to live.

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We'll have to agree to disagree on the progress of time in LWW. It's a magic winter, let's leave it at that. =D

I think I mentioned it somewhere else, but since the Narnian world is not our world, the incarnation and the passion would be different: that's what Lewis is saying. It's not a one-to-one correlation because there worlds don't correlate one-to-one.And, as I mentioned, Lewis didn't start out intending to write Aslan as Christ: it just happened over time, so his characterization of Aslan in LWW was a little off.

Ok, I think that's all I have. Let's see if all these comments come through. =D

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Date: 2009-05-05 05:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] animus-wyrmis.livejournal.com
This is excellent! I adore Jadis-centric fics; she's such an interesting character. Your take on her is AWESOME, she's sort of a mix between Eve and Satan and it's brilliant. She isn't guilty--she has nothing to be guilty *of*, because in her mind Aslan isn't someone to be worshiped and Narnia is a place to be conquered.

Jadis was the Queen of Charn and she bowed to no one. Omg, yes, this is Jadis entirely. She wants to dominate, and she's willing to destroy everything to do it, and then she wants to make sure you know she's going to.

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