back to part 40I'm still not sure quite where to put the chapter break, dammit. Well, I have Friday and Saturday off from work; hopefully I will get a bunch of writing done between necessary errands and that will give me a better feel for the length of the remaining scenes.
( Trollstuck, part 41 )continue to part 42Okay, I think I will get started on revising the early parts of chapter 9, regardless of where I eventually decide to end it -- what you've been reading is basically my... not quite
rough draft, but not anywhere near what I'd call polished either. Maybe draft 1.5? Anyway, I need to add a little bit more sensory description and scene-blocking, and also clarify exactly how destroyed Aradia's hive is, because that's going to be relevant to future stories. *evil grin*