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Here we are at the conclusion, once again slightly edited from the FA version for your reading pleasure. ;-)

Paint the Town, part 6 )

And that, as they say, is that. I have no plans for a sequel at this time, though considering that I didn't intend to write this story, I wouldn't rule it out entirely. Maybe something about Remus, or Ron and Padma, or random snippits of everyday life. That's how Restoration happened, after all -- a bunch of strung-together snippits.

And I do like this particular post-war universe.

But I will not let my mind wander just yet! Instead, I will finish "The Way of the Apartment Manager." (Which has its own problems in terms of going away from my outline -- at this point, it needs two endings: one gloomy to return it to canon and one happier to go off on an AU tangent -- but which does have a definite plot arc.)
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Paint the Town is now up in its entirety at FA, but you should keep reading this version instead. Because I've made a few minor edits between submitting the story to FA and posting it here, which I think generally improve the flow and emphasis of certain bits. And because I Say So. :-)

Paint the Town, part 5 )
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You know, I really need to get my own website one of these days, if only so I can put up definitive versions of my stories. I'm a compulsive editor, see, so even after I've posted something on one site, I tend to tweak it subtly before putting it up somewhere else. So this version of PTT is ever-so-slightly different from the version going up on FA (a changed word here and there, for clarity or a shift of emphasis).

The changes usually aren't drastic enough to justify resubmitting an entire story to someone else's website, but I'd like to have the 'good' versions all together somewhere.

Anyway. On to the fic!

Paint the Town, part 4 )

In real life news, my project won't actually be done by the end of the week -- we're getting another load of invoices on Monday, which we will have to check against the vendor catalogues (price shifts, you know -- we've disabled automatic electronic price updates so we could manually fix things), check against the general items, and then receive into the system. On top of that, we're going to have to assign storage locations on an inventory tally sheet, or something like that.

Oh well. I finished reviewing my half of the December invoices and have moved on to creating general items to match some of the new vendor items, which is much less likely to make my head explode from sheer boredom. :-)
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Part 3. Still rated R, and we're getting closer to the actual sex. (Which is still glossed over, because I don't really write porn/erotica -- just not where my interest lies -- but quite definitely there.)

Paint the Town, part 3 )

In other news, we're nearing the end of the current project at work. I wonder what I get to do next? I hope it isn't something on the NSS side, because I still know nothing about the nutritional bits of the software programs. (I also seem to have learned more about the financial bits than most people in my department usually need to know. *shrug*)
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What I did today: dropped off my time card so I will get paid next week, returned and renewed library books, put away laundry, wrote a little, and repotted Sparky, my new California ivy. (Yes, I name my plants. Yes, I'm kind of weird.)

I didn't manage to finish chapter 8 of 'Apartment Manager' -- though I did come fairly close, and the final scene is plotted -- so here's another bit of 'Paint the Town' instead. :-)

Still rated R, this section probably with more justification than the last one.

Paint the Town, part 2 )

And there we are. Hmm. In terms of POV sections, we're only 5/14 of the way through. Hermione and Ginny get 4 POV sections each, while Harry, Draco, and Luna get 2 each. And we start with Hermione, then Ginny, and end with Ginny, then Hermione. Occasionally I do try to pin something vaguely resembling a structure onto my stories. (Well, beyond coherent narrative, that is. I always try for that. But I don't usually write multiple POV stories; honestly, I think this and "Restoration" are the only times I've attempted that in HP fanfiction.)
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So. Today I submitted three fics/chapters to FA -- Falls the Shadow (a Petuniafic), the epilogue of First You Have to Get There (a light Harry/Ginny romance), and Paint the Town (a kinda-sorta sequel to Restoration). I am also going to serialize "Paint the Town" here on my livejournal, mostly because I can. :-)

Here's what you need to know about "Restoration" in order for "Paint the Town" to make sense.

It's a post-war, post-Hogwarts story. Voldemort killed Dumbledore and then Harry killed him. Ron and Hermione jointly killed Lucius Malfoy and Bellatrix Lestrange. Draco, after learning up close and personal just what evil and torture and hatred are like, switched sides and sat out the end of the war.

Ron runs a WWW outlet in Hogsmeade. Hermione works at the Ministry. Ginny does experimental potions research. Luna is the chief editor for the Quibbler, and she's hired Draco to write travel guides. Harry, Ron, and Hermione shared a flat for a couple years; Luna and Ginny lived on the floor above them.

And Ginny likes Muggle nightclubs.

(The ff.net version is the most definitive, rather than this LJ version, or the FictionAlley version.)

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NOTE: This story is rated R; it contains slash, femslash, het, threesomes, light bondage, and alcohol.

Paint the Town, part 1 )

Part 2 will probably be up tomorrow. Unless, you know, I manage to finish chapter 8 of 'Apartment Manager' instead. :-)
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This is the story I've been working on for the past couple months. It began as a response to [livejournal.com profile] 15minuteficlets word #67 (Pause), tacked on a response to words #69 and #70 (Building on Sand), and continued to grow from there. Somewhere along the line it acquired a theme and something that might be termed a plot, though its structure and time-flow remain fairly haphazard.

To forestall questions: no, I don't know the overall course of the war, nor how Harry killed Voldemort, and I don't particularly care. All that matters is that they did win, though not without a price, and life continues in the aftermath. Also, this is a one-shot. It is not the start of chaptered story.

(It will have a sequel, of sorts, but "Paint the Town" is a horse of a different color. "Restoration" is genfic. "Paint the Town" is very definitely not.)

Restoration (FictionAlley version)

Restoration (Fanfiction.net version)

I'd advise reading the FF.net version. It was posted several months after the FA version, which gave me the chance to revise it in light of some questions and comments from FA reviewers. The changes are most notable in Draco's section, "Second Chances."
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I seem to have cleared out some space in my brain. Here are the results:

Building on Sand )
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I seem to have cleared out some space in my brain. Here are the results:

Building on Sand )
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I wrote this in longhand last night and revised it this morning, but I still don't like it much. Nevertheless, I consider it better than trying to write about the playwright Harold Pinter, which is the first thing the word conjured in my brain.

A post-war scenario:

Restoration )

Tomorrow we leave the island. I will be sorry to go -- I always am -- but the damp, gray weather makes the departure a bit less of a wound.

Oddly enough, when I'm away from home and family, I often feel more homesick for the island than for New Jersey. I suppose it's because the island is harder to reach, and because it's more of a special place. (This may be related to the way I miss my dog more than my family -- I can't talk to my dog the way I can talk to humans.)

Ah well. At least I won't have to split more wood! It can be quite a fight, bashing wedges through tough, green wood with a maul. (And good god, does it give me lower back pain...)

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