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Date: 2006-07-14 04:48 am (UTC)
ext_34193: Blind cave fish, words "Will dissect for food" (0)
Just dropped by to say - I love your fic, the Guardian, and the Way of the Apartment Manager. Yukiko is the first OC I ever felt anything for, even and especially because she is the main character in your stories. I mean - I love Naga, I love your portrayal of Kakashi, Iruka and Naruto - and it just... gels. It's believeable, likeable, and totally totally addictive.

Of course, being a yaoi shipper, I so want kakashi and Iruka to get together - Iruka blushes so easily! But if it doesn't happen... It's still perfect - this is the few Gen fics that I would read, no matter what happens in the end - in fact, it is probably the only fic that I would read, with no pairings... so far.

I love your OCs. All of them, Yukiko, Naga, and even that creepy Seichi. They all are realistic people, not 'Mary sues'.

And Sasuke? He's such a little angst queen, but it's believeable, probable, and I can't wait for Yukiko's pragmatism and hands-off attitude start working on him. He deserves to have an influence like that in his life, right?

It makes me wonder too, how come Iruka didn't catch him, or try to father/be an older brother to him. Maybe Sasuke and Iruka just don't match that way, the way Naruto and Iruka do. >.<

Okay, I think I'm off topic now... Keep up the fantastic work, and I look forward to your next chapters!

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