This is what I get for avoiding lj for a bit--the one thing I've been waiting and waiting for finally appears! *squee* Guess it's a good thing I didn't avoid it any longer!
This is just amazing. *shiver* I can't stress how much I love your writing--not just this fic, but all of them. You just have a way with words that really appeals to me.
Sasuke's conversation with Duo about vengeance was really touching; I loved the way Duo kept making comparisons and really feeling how horrible it must have been for Sasuke and seeing all the implications just from those two short sentences. It's even more poignant because Duo doesn't know who "the man" is. Actually, I suppose the saddest part of all is that if there's anyone Sasuke thought hung the moon, it was Itachi.
And of course, after so long waiting for this part, you leave off with the most horrible cliffhanger ever! I'm absolutely dying! I do have to admit that it's perfect, however much it's torturing me. You have an amazing sense of how to stun readers and catch their attention. It's that way with words I mentioned I liked so much! Perfect ending lines, and I'm going to spend the next few days agonizing of the possible continuation of that scene. No, seriously, I will. Possibly longer than the next few days. I hope you're happy, hijacking all my spare time like that!
Really, though, I just love this fic so much I can't even be bothered to really glare at you for the evil cliffhanger. Because it's Lemonade! What I've been waiting months and months for! My life is a little bit more complete. XD Although... I've never used this icon before, so you're getting it now instead of the glare. You get baby!Sasuke glare! That's so much worse than anything I could do. :D
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Date: 2006-01-23 04:18 am (UTC)This is just amazing. *shiver* I can't stress how much I love your writing--not just this fic, but all of them. You just have a way with words that really appeals to me.
Sasuke's conversation with Duo about vengeance was really touching; I loved the way Duo kept making comparisons and really feeling how horrible it must have been for Sasuke and seeing all the implications just from those two short sentences. It's even more poignant because Duo doesn't know who "the man" is. Actually, I suppose the saddest part of all is that if there's anyone Sasuke thought hung the moon, it was Itachi.
And of course, after so long waiting for this part, you leave off with the most horrible cliffhanger ever! I'm absolutely dying! I do have to admit that it's perfect, however much it's torturing me. You have an amazing sense of how to stun readers and catch their attention. It's that way with words I mentioned I liked so much! Perfect ending lines, and I'm going to spend the next few days agonizing of the possible continuation of that scene. No, seriously, I will. Possibly longer than the next few days. I hope you're happy, hijacking all my spare time like that!
Really, though, I just love this fic so much I can't even be bothered to really glare at you for the evil cliffhanger. Because it's Lemonade! What I've been waiting months and months for! My life is a little bit more complete. XD Although... I've never used this icon before, so you're getting it now instead of the glare. You get baby!Sasuke glare! That's so much worse than anything I could do. :D