Mar. 27th, 2005

edenfalling: headshot of a raccoon, looking left (raccoon)
Chapter 10 of 'The Way of the Apartment Manager,' in which Yukiko practices kata, Kakashi has an unfortunate encounter with hair dye, Iruka loses his temper, Naga learns Go, Naruto finally figures out the secret of Yukiko's squeaky floor tiles, and Gai doesn't walk around the village walls 100 times on his hands.

The verb tenses in scene 2 are screwy, but I didn't want to constantly add 'had' to all of them, or italicize snippets into flashbacks. If you can think of a good fix, please tell me!

The Way of the Apartment Manager, 10 )

I meant to end this on a nasty cliffhanger, but Yukiko and Naruto had other ideas. So instead you'll get a tense moment in the middle of chapter 11.
edenfalling: headshot of a raccoon, looking left (raccoon)
Chapter 10 of 'The Way of the Apartment Manager,' in which Yukiko practices kata, Kakashi has an unfortunate encounter with hair dye, Iruka loses his temper, Naga learns Go, Naruto finally figures out the secret of Yukiko's squeaky floor tiles, and Gai doesn't walk around the village walls 100 times on his hands.

The verb tenses in scene 2 are screwy, but I didn't want to constantly add 'had' to all of them, or italicize snippets into flashbacks. If you can think of a good fix, please tell me!

The Way of the Apartment Manager, 10 )

I meant to end this on a nasty cliffhanger, but Yukiko and Naruto had other ideas. So instead you'll get a tense moment in the middle of chapter 11.
edenfalling: headshot of a raccoon, looking left (raccoon)
Okay, I give up. Clearly Naruto has become a secondary fic-writing fandom for me instead of a temporary departure from my usual HP stomping grounds.

Team 7 friendship with overtones of something more, Sakura POV. Potential future fic, taking into account everything through manga chapter 253. So yeah, there are some potential spoilers, but they're quite vague.

Tension, Before )
edenfalling: headshot of a raccoon, looking left (raccoon)
Okay, I give up. Clearly Naruto has become a secondary fic-writing fandom for me instead of a temporary departure from my usual HP stomping grounds.

Team 7 friendship with overtones of something more, Sakura POV. Potential future fic, taking into account everything through manga chapter 253. So yeah, there are some potential spoilers, but they're quite vague.

Tension, Before )

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