Tonight I picked away at ch. 5 of "The Courting Dance," which has been stalled out for several months on account of, well, history infodumping. I had to put the history lesson in sooner or later, and Corin seems to have gotten the short end of the stick -- he gets to explain it all to Cor.
It is really frustrating to compress everything and try to make it sound vaguely like a plausible conversation. At the moment, it's not especially realistic -- the paragraphs are too long, with not nearly enough back-and-forth or background scene-setting stuff going on to ground the dialogue. But!
1. I have successfully plowed through the Archenlandish civil war, the settling of Telmar (and associated Calormene invasion of Archenland -- I love coming up with explanations for stupid things Lewis put in his timeline *grin*), and some culture clash stuff.
2. I have also managed to interlock "The Courting Dance" with "The Corners of the World" -- my unfinished story of how Jadis got from the end of MN to invading Narnia around the year 900 -- which makes my world-building heart absurdly happy. *bigger grin*
3. This means I've reached the interesting parts, which deal with the Long Winter, pirates, banking, differing cultural definitions of honor, the slave trade, and economic crises. *biggest grin*
And once this chapter is finally done, I can get back to the romantic "comedy" aspects, which will hopefully go faster. \o/
(950 words and counting -- since chapter lengths vary from 1,100 words to 1,800, I probably have... 600-700 more to go? *crosses fingers*)
It is really frustrating to compress everything and try to make it sound vaguely like a plausible conversation. At the moment, it's not especially realistic -- the paragraphs are too long, with not nearly enough back-and-forth or background scene-setting stuff going on to ground the dialogue. But!
1. I have successfully plowed through the Archenlandish civil war, the settling of Telmar (and associated Calormene invasion of Archenland -- I love coming up with explanations for stupid things Lewis put in his timeline *grin*), and some culture clash stuff.
2. I have also managed to interlock "The Courting Dance" with "The Corners of the World" -- my unfinished story of how Jadis got from the end of MN to invading Narnia around the year 900 -- which makes my world-building heart absurdly happy. *bigger grin*
3. This means I've reached the interesting parts, which deal with the Long Winter, pirates, banking, differing cultural definitions of honor, the slave trade, and economic crises. *biggest grin*
And once this chapter is finally done, I can get back to the romantic "comedy" aspects, which will hopefully go faster. \o/
(950 words and counting -- since chapter lengths vary from 1,100 words to 1,800, I probably have... 600-700 more to go? *crosses fingers*)