Nov. 4th, 2010

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Ashes, part 3 )

1) I really need to do research on trees and flowers and other plants of Africa, India, and South America, because man, my botanical knowledge is both terrifyingly limited and also restricted like whoa to the Midwest and Northeast of the USA, and that is just boring, boring, boring. So I will be faking my way through here. Please bear with me.

2) Sular's basically a plot device. Does that show, or is she coming off like a real person?

3) I still fail at physical description. *headdesk*

4) Are my metaphysics at all clear and/or convincing, or am I making a muddle of things? Any feedback would be very welcome!

5) 1,600 words today, 4,200 total.

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