I got distracted and ended up finishing chapter 8 of "The Courting Dance" instead of getting any further on the Jade/Dave/Terezi porn (which still needs a title, btw...). Noooooooot the same mental track AT ALL. But oh well, writing is writing!
Politics intrudes on romance, but Hwin knows that as long as her friends work together, they can overcome any obstacle. (1,425 words)
( Simple Problems )
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Back to The Beating of Our Hearts
Forward to chapter 9
Read the final version on ff.net. (Trust me, you want to read the final version. The journal version is a beta draft, with all the mistakes that implies.)
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As always, I welcome any ideas on how to improve the chapter (and how to make Hwin's POV more properly equine). :-)
Politics intrudes on romance, but Hwin knows that as long as her friends work together, they can overcome any obstacle. (1,425 words)
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Back to The Beating of Our Hearts
Forward to chapter 9
Read the final version on ff.net. (Trust me, you want to read the final version. The journal version is a beta draft, with all the mistakes that implies.)
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As always, I welcome any ideas on how to improve the chapter (and how to make Hwin's POV more properly equine). :-)