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Apr. 22nd, 2013

As seen in various places around the net: List the first and last lines of the last 21 stories you wrote. (Yes, these are supposed to be two separate memes. I decided to combine them for maximum efficiency. *grin*)

Note: I'm discounting all the little fills from this year's Three Sentence Ficathon because A) they would take up more than half the allotted space, and B) the constraints of the format render the resulting sentences uncharacteristic of my usual writing style. I'm also discounting chapters of WIPs; only complete stories need apply. With those caveats in place...

( First and Last Lines of My Last 21 Stories )

I can't find any pattern in my opening lines, but it's amazing how many of the closing ones have some kind of emphasis on two (or more) characters being together -- not necessarily in a romantic sense, but apparently I am really, really big on emotional connection. Or that may just be a side effect of my attempt to write Cotton Candy Bingo prompts. Nine of the above fics (~43%) are specifically intended as multi-character fluff, so the whole "Yay, we are not alone!" thing may make most sense in that light. Of course, I seem to go that route in unrelated stories as well, so maybe it's just me being me. *shrug*

I lean toward relatively short last lines, whereas my opening lines are all over the map. I also note that not a single one of these stories ends with dialogue, though several of them start that way. (Okay, technically "Short Story Long" ends with dialogue, but the whole story is nothing but dialogue -- it's written entirely in chatlog format -- so that's not really a fair comparison.)

Aside from that, I got nothing.

Current Mood: calm
Current Location: ithaca, ny
Crossposts: http://edenfalling.livejournal.com/685650.html

Summary: "Chamber of Secrets" from Ginny's point of view. Things settle down over Christmas holidays, until Xanthe tells Ginny a bit of family history and casts the previous months in a new, and unwelcome, light.

This is not the climactic chapter -- that would be the end of ch. 12 and the start of ch. 13 -- but it is the keystone chapter, where the story pivots on a hinge. Up until now "Secrets" has been Ginny-and-Tom against the world; after this, it becomes Ginny versus Tom.

( cut for length )

Bechdel Test = PASS

Current Mood: tired
Current Location: ithaca, ny
Current Music: Loreena McKennitt - Night Ride Across the Caucasus
Crossposts: http://edenfalling.livejournal.com/685831.html

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[Meme] 21 First and Last Lines
rereading "Secrets" -- Chapter 9: Telling Stories

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