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Jane/Dave porn is now at 2,100 words.
I think the weirdest part of it so far is not the surprise!bondage thing. That is pretty mild, really, and turned out to be because of things I've been thinking about Jane's personality in general. The actual weird thing is that I'm in Jane's POV and she flat-out refuses to think about Dave as more than one person, even when he's time-looped and has two bodies in the room concurrently. There's no "past Dave" or "current Dave" or "future Dave." There isn't even "the Dave in [this place]" or "the Dave who is [doing action]." It's all just Dave. Which may be technically correct in some respects, but can get extremely narratively confusing to write, let alone to read!
I think I've figured out why she's doing that, and in any case I have been trying to roll with it since doing otherwise resulted in Jane clamming up and refusing to tell me what happens next, but man. WEIRD.
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Okay, back to writing.
ETA: 2,425 words now and I am knocking off for the night. I think another thousand words should reach the end? *crosses fingers*
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(In other news Monday was quarterly inventory day at the smoke shop -- we now manually count everything on sale four times a year rather than two because Mr. Speakerphone is a paranoid dick that way. It was also weekly magazine delivery day, and biweekly recycling day, and the day we received both the Instant Whip (half-and-half and muffins) and J&R (cigars) deliveries, so I was understandably reduced to utter porridge-brain by the end of my shift. At least I got free lunch and dinner out of the experience?)
I think the weirdest part of it so far is not the surprise!bondage thing. That is pretty mild, really, and turned out to be because of things I've been thinking about Jane's personality in general. The actual weird thing is that I'm in Jane's POV and she flat-out refuses to think about Dave as more than one person, even when he's time-looped and has two bodies in the room concurrently. There's no "past Dave" or "current Dave" or "future Dave." There isn't even "the Dave in [this place]" or "the Dave who is [doing action]." It's all just Dave. Which may be technically correct in some respects, but can get extremely narratively confusing to write, let alone to read!
I think I've figured out why she's doing that, and in any case I have been trying to roll with it since doing otherwise resulted in Jane clamming up and refusing to tell me what happens next, but man. WEIRD.
...
Okay, back to writing.
ETA: 2,425 words now and I am knocking off for the night. I think another thousand words should reach the end? *crosses fingers*
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(In other news Monday was quarterly inventory day at the smoke shop -- we now manually count everything on sale four times a year rather than two because Mr. Speakerphone is a paranoid dick that way. It was also weekly magazine delivery day, and biweekly recycling day, and the day we received both the Instant Whip (half-and-half and muffins) and J&R (cigars) deliveries, so I was understandably reduced to utter porridge-brain by the end of my shift. At least I got free lunch and dinner out of the experience?)
