Ha! Finished the long version of my remix, did some preliminary edits, posted the beta draft, and sent it off for beta-reading.
...I am so sorry I am making my little sister read porn. I mean, I know she is a grown woman. I'm sure she's read plenty of erotica and porn on her own time. But we've never really talked about that sort of thing, not to mention this is porn that I wrote, which is therefore completely different. I told her all I really need edited is the thematic stuff and she does not have to comment on the hotness (or lack thereof) of the porn. We shall see if she takes that convenient escape clause.
*twitches in reflexive embarrassment*
Um. On that note, is anybody else willing to look over some porn-plus-themes for me? It's not in one of my big fandoms, but I have written in it before, and it has a broad base for culturally osmotic familiarity. (In other words, I'm sure you've heard of it and know a few details even if you've never had direct contact with the canon.) And anyway the basic thrust (ha, whoops) should be clear even without specific fandom familiarity.
Also, I could use feedback on the porn. *wry*
It's over 3,000 words and under 10,000, and I will tell you any further details if you are interested and give me an email address at which to contact you.
...I am so sorry I am making my little sister read porn. I mean, I know she is a grown woman. I'm sure she's read plenty of erotica and porn on her own time. But we've never really talked about that sort of thing, not to mention this is porn that I wrote, which is therefore completely different. I told her all I really need edited is the thematic stuff and she does not have to comment on the hotness (or lack thereof) of the porn. We shall see if she takes that convenient escape clause.
*twitches in reflexive embarrassment*
Um. On that note, is anybody else willing to look over some porn-plus-themes for me? It's not in one of my big fandoms, but I have written in it before, and it has a broad base for culturally osmotic familiarity. (In other words, I'm sure you've heard of it and know a few details even if you've never had direct contact with the canon.) And anyway the basic thrust (ha, whoops) should be clear even without specific fandom familiarity.
Also, I could use feedback on the porn. *wry*
It's over 3,000 words and under 10,000, and I will tell you any further details if you are interested and give me an email address at which to contact you.