I think the shop talk needs a little tweaking. It's a pain trying to find the right balance between clarity and over-explaining, and genjutsu is already so vague and broad compared to legilimency or memory charms, and jutsu and spells never overlap quite the way I'd like, and... Yeah. *sigh*
Also, Anko and Kakashi switched their roles without bothering to ask me first -- Anko was supposed to be all "Destruction now!" while Kakashi was supposed to think of reading Tomu's mind -- but it seems to flow better this way, since Kakashi has been carefully refusing to humanize 'the memory imprint' the way the other three are doing. It surprised me, but they got to the right place at the end of the chapter, so I'm not going to argue!
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Date: 2008-02-12 03:45 am (UTC)Also, Anko and Kakashi switched their roles without bothering to ask me first -- Anko was supposed to be all "Destruction now!" while Kakashi was supposed to think of reading Tomu's mind -- but it seems to flow better this way, since Kakashi has been carefully refusing to humanize 'the memory imprint' the way the other three are doing. It surprised me, but they got to the right place at the end of the chapter, so I'm not going to argue!