o hhat first one is probably a chalenge to keep in check too .I have some charactersstrayign of their origina lpoitn and goign into fits of reminiscingabout old tiemsand..bah.flashbacks. logn ones. oh those words. nto so bad as telegram style though. or..*sudder* one-centence paragraphs..or do ithe breadley wayand stick sixdifferent pov's i noen chapter. idont' say idon't liek that-oen but it took time alogn with oen of myfriends lognfics who does he sameto get used to that sort of thing.
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Date: 2006-01-21 12:18 am (UTC)oh those words. nto so bad as telegram style though. or..*sudder* one-centence paragraphs..or do ithe breadley wayand stick sixdifferent pov's i noen chapter. idont' say idon't liek that-oen but it took time alogn with oen of myfriends lognfics who does he sameto get used to that sort of thing.