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Date: 2011-08-17 03:41 pm (UTC)
Oh, I am so glad to see more of this story. You flesh out Arvis and Cor and the rest so well. In this chapter, Bree really shines. His voice comes through very clearly, with his sense of self-import and streak of praticality. Hwin's actions equally show how well you've got her character. It seems very right that these four should be on a journey again too.
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Elizabeth Culmer

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