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Date: 2011-11-10 08:30 pm (UTC)
I love this. It's concise and to the point yet still covering a broad swath of complex ideas, and I particularly love the way you open it - given the quasi-Lucy pov it settles in as corresponding directly to her experience, but the generality of ruling "one's" kingdom I thought particularly nice as the story advanced into the debate/discussion of the four monarchs' different yet equally important specific tasks of ruling.

Also I just love Lucy, and she is wonderful here. :)
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