mollymoon used to do that for me, last year, when she was still beta-ing for me. She made me rewrite Bittersweet Sixteen twice because the original scenario stank, then I'd written it in the wrong voice (third past instead of first present). She always told me when something didn't work. Alas, she isn't betaing for me anymore (for personal reasons related to her having lots of health problems). Now I rely on abigail89 to tell me which things suck :)
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Date: 2005-06-17 04:20 pm (UTC)