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Date: 2015-01-24 03:32 pm (UTC)
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Set-up often has to get a little omniscient unless you're going for the instant-immersion-with-resulting-instant-questions approach; I think this strikes a reasonable balance. It sounds very Legendary and yet every line of it is calling legends into question... and yet the legend seems to be playing out in some form anyway. I like the layering of that, and the complexity it sets your main characters up for.

*wry* And Sunbright sounds like she's going to be one of the "seriously racked off at all this idiocy" sort of protags.
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