"Guardian" progress update
Jul. 20th, 2015 11:28 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Chapter 16 rough draft is now 1,400 words and I think I've figured out how to wrap up the fight scene (okay, it may end up eating half the chapter after all, but at least it's working now), so I stuck chapter 3 up on AO3 tonight.
Chapter the Third, in which Naruto disapproves of his new neighbor, Yukiko receives a mission, Naga and Kakashi have a little heart-to-heart, Yukiko deals with her family, and the plot kicks into gear at last.
I decided, upon due reflection, not to change Seichi's name after all. I'd been seriously thinking about it, because it's kind of weird and obscure compared to Seiichi, but eh, it's grown on me over the years. (I'm sticking by the switch to Tsukihime, though, because people kept persistently misreading her name that way anyhow. Plus it makes the joke more obvious, which compensates for the way I changed her hair to golden-brown instead of blonde. *wry*)
Chapter the Third, in which Naruto disapproves of his new neighbor, Yukiko receives a mission, Naga and Kakashi have a little heart-to-heart, Yukiko deals with her family, and the plot kicks into gear at last.
I decided, upon due reflection, not to change Seichi's name after all. I'd been seriously thinking about it, because it's kind of weird and obscure compared to Seiichi, but eh, it's grown on me over the years. (I'm sticking by the switch to Tsukihime, though, because people kept persistently misreading her name that way anyhow. Plus it makes the joke more obvious, which compensates for the way I changed her hair to golden-brown instead of blonde. *wry*)