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I have finished the preliminary round of edits on the still tragically untitled Narnia/Naruto crossover! \o/

Now I need somebody else to look it over and point out the weak spots so I can fix them.

If you are willing to beta a crossover (ridiculous in concept, but dead serious in execution) featuring six original Narnian characters plus Tsunade and Shizune at the start of their wandering years, please let me know and give me a method to contact you. The story is currently just over 13,700 words long and contains 1) some violence and gore, 2) a family quarrel, and 3) a lot of ethical struggling over how best to react when a Witch conquers your country, turns many of your fellow citizens to her cause, and then locks the borders and drops an endless magical winter over the entire land.

This is mostly a Narnia story, but it would be helpful to have some familiarity with Naruto so you can tell me how one particular choice works in regard to that canon. I initially made that choice because it made me laugh out loud in the middle of my workday, but my sense of humor can be idiosyncratic so I want to know how it reads to someone who doesn't share the inside of my head.

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Elizabeth Culmer

May 2025

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