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I was poking along tonight editing a story and suddenly realized there was a blatant Thematic Point in a stray bit of dialogue that I'd somehow managed to completely overlook while drafting the fic. Accidental thematic coherence for the win?

Anyway, I expanded and sharpened that part of the conversation so I can now use it as a callback mention later on, which will be helpful in tightening up the (currently tragically shapeless) ending.

And now, bed. Sleep is both important and delicious. :)
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edenfalling: stylized black-and-white line art of a sunset over water (Default)
Elizabeth Culmer

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