May. 19th, 2010

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Another snippet of "Cobweb Maze," this one after Takeshi spends the night on Lia's couch following an attack from her stalker. He drives her in to her store the next day and hangs around for a while, watching her prepare to open. (550 words)

In the Morning Light )

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Lia and Takeshi confuse the hell out of each other sometimes. Possibly I should not find that as cute as I generally do. :-)
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I would like to state, for the record, that coming up with plausible-sounding (not even plausible, necessarily, just plausible-sounding) jutsu as the plot demands, working out how they would be experienced by the user and the target, and then describing all this information concisely and coherently, is a goddamn pain in the neck.

No special point. Just FYI.

(The same goes for any system of 'magic,' actually. *hates on various WIPs*)

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