[Fic] "Turnabout" -- Naruto

[edenfalling]

This was a comment-fic gift for askerian, who has continuation rights, should she want them. *grin* Team 7, and the problems with having two ridiculously competetive boys as your lovers.

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Turnabout
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"My turn, bastard!"

"No."

Naruto stalks forward, completely ignoring the open curtains and the tiny little fact that he's naked and, well, horny. "You got her before, dickwad -- which was totally cheating! I'm not giving another inch."

Sasuke raises an eyebrow. Naruto descends into inarticulate snarls.

Sakura kicks her heels against the bed frame and wonders why she ever thought that sex with her teammates would do anything but degenerate into a fight. By this point, she's beyond embarrassment. Open windows? Who cares. Yelling fit to wake the dead? Whatever. Naked boys clearly getting off on trying to one-up each other? Been there, done that.

She's not even good at blow-jobs. But -- and here she feels a smile spread across her face, a smile that she doesn't usually let out of the echo chamber in the back of her mind -- she does like to watch their faces when they come. And the boys need a lesson. She isn't a prize, damn it.

"Naruto. Sasuke." She waits. "Hey, idiots. Hey. Shut the fuck up and listen to me!" Their heads snap around fast enough to make something purr underneath her consciousness. "It's my turn. Suck each other off and let me watch -- it's obviously what you really want to do."

Sasuke is too surprised to keep his face blank. Naruto's jaw drops. Then they start stammering out excuses and whining for other options, but in a little grace note, both their cocks perk up.

In a place that isn't a place, Inner Sakura is laughing her head off.

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( crossposted at naruto_ot3 )

I am experimenting with fake lj-cuts instead of plain links. It's sad how much fun I can wring out of my pathetic html ineptitude. ;-)

Comments

[erised1810.livejournal.com]

what on earth isa fake lj cut? I thoguthit was someone else's soel invention of bolding alink in asorto fway adn now yo umention it that'ss proof it's an acutal lj feature? hmmm..*confused&

[alliancesjr.livejournal.com]

No, what you described is pretty much how it is. It's formatting a link in such a way to make it appear to be a cut, when it is, in fact, a simple link to some place that's else.

Anyway, the story? Priceless. XD

[edenfalling]

Thanks!