On due consideration, the opening of scene two was fine as-is; I was just in one of those moods where everything I write looks terrible and blanked on how to transition from the intro to other stuff.
Today I wrote 200 words of that transition, and "Guardian" ch. 17 is now at 1,525 total. My only choice now is when, exactly, to have a man with a gun kick down the door. (Um. Metaphorically. There are no actual doors or guns involved in this scene.)
Today I wrote 200 words of that transition, and "Guardian" ch. 17 is now at 1,525 total. My only choice now is when, exactly, to have a man with a gun kick down the door. (Um. Metaphorically. There are no actual doors or guns involved in this scene.)